Autobiography E-mail via E-pals
7th Grade Core:Internet Reciprocal Teaching
Name: ________________________
Mrs. Torrente Date: ________________Per: ___
Autobiographical Incident: “Me, myself, and I!”
An autobiography is the story of a person’s life told by that person. (On a side note… let’s get cellular! Auto means “self”, bio means “life”, and graphy means “writing,” hence, autobiography!) An autobiography is written from the first-person point of view, using pronouns like I and me and is a form of non-fiction. Autobiographies can be written to entertain, persuade, inform, or express opinion. Usually, the writer tells about past events from the perspective of being older and wiser. Therefore, autobiographies often provide revealing insights into the writer’s (That’s you!) attitudes toward the events that shaped and changed his or her life. Autobiographies also help a reader understand the society in which the writer lived.
Your mission: You are going to send an autobiographical e-mail to five other students in our class using your e-PALS account. You will also send a thoughtful reply message to at least three classmates who wrote to you.
Step 1: Complete the following brainstorm questionnaire.
Step 2: For Homework - Compose (write) a rough draft e-mail on binder paper,
gathering all of your ideas from your questionnaire into paragraphs (you don’t need
to use all of your brainstorming ideas). Remember, your e-mail should read like a
brief story of your life and should flow smoothly when read. (Due Tomorrow)
Step 3: Log in to your e-PALS account. Compose an autobiographical e-mail and send it to
the five classmates beneath you on the class e-mail roster.
Step 4: (To be completed the day following the completion of step 3.) Read and reply with
thoughtful commentary to at least three of the autobiographical e-mails that you
receive.
Autobiographical Brainstorm:
- What is your full name?
- Are you named after anyone?
- What does your name mean? (This might require some research on the internet.)
- How do you feel about your name?
- Do you have a nick name?
- What are three adjectives you would use to describe yourself and why?
- If you were an animal, what would you be?
- Where is your family from and who first immigrated to the United States?
- What is your favorite color?
- What is your favorite subject in school?
- What do you want to be when you grow up?
- Have you ever traveled anywhere? Where?
- Do you speak any other languages besides English?
- What is your favorite holiday?
- What are some of your favorite things to eat?
- Do you have any siblings? If so, what are their names and how old are they?
- What is one of the most interesting things about you?
- What do you like to do in your free time?
- What are some of your favorite books, movies, etc.?
- Anything else we should know???
Autobiographical E-mail Grading Rubric
Name: _____________________________ Total Points Received: _____ / 25
Date: ______________ per: ___________
Grade: A B C D F
A= 21-25pts B= 17-20 pts C= 12=16 pts D=8-11pts F= 0-7 pts
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Needs Work (1 point) |
Good Job! (3 points) |
Fabulous!! (5 points) |
Completed Survey |
Survey was not completed or was partially completed. |
Survey was completed. |
Survey was completed thoughtfully. |
Completed R.D.
E-mail |
Rough draft was not completed and/or is not in appropriate paragraph form. |
Rough draft was completed in appropriate paragraph form, but needs some editing. |
Rough Draft was completed and edited. RD is in appropriate paragraph form. |
Composed and Sent Autobio E-Mail Successfully |
E-mail is very hard to understand and/or it was not sent to five classmates. |
E-mail reads pretty smoothly, but some parts may be confusing. E-mail was sent to five classmates. |
E-mail reads smoothly and was sent to five classmates. |
E-mail Content |
Your autobiography did not tell us very much about you. You have many grammatical errors. |
You wrote a thoughtful brief autobiography, but need to use spell check and to proof read carefully. |
You wrote a thoughtful brief autobiography. We learned a lot about you! You used spell check, proof read carefully, and used an appropriate format. |
Replied Successfully to Received E-mails |
You did not reply to three classmates. |
You replied to three classmates |
You replied to three classmates with a thoughtful response. |
7th Grade Internet Reciprocal Teaching Name____________________________
Mrs. Torrente Date_______________
Email Rules
(Keep this in your reading notebook all year)
Having an email account requires you to act responsibly.
In class e-mail is NOT private. Your e-mail messages (sent and received) will be read by others.
ePALS accounts are to be used for class work and projects.
Sending messages that contain anything unlawful, harmful, abusive, harassing, or otherwise unkind will be met with severe consequences.
Don't send anything in messages that YOU wouldn't want to read.
Never send or encourage anyone to send abusive messages.
NEVER reveal full names, home addresses, phone numbers nor the full names, addresses or phone numbers of any other person while on the Internet.
These rules and consequences are in place to protect and support students and our class.
Consequences for Breaking Our Class Email Rules
1st offense: Loss of e-mail privileges for 2 weeks minimum and phone call home and possible disciplinary referral.
2nd offense: Loss of e-mail privileges for minimum of 3 weeks - parent conference and possible disciplinary referral.
3rd offense: Loss of e-mail privileges for the remainder of the quarter – possibly for the entire year depending on the severity of the offense. Parent/Administrator conference and disciplinary referral.
This can effect your grade since you may not be able to complete all assignments.
Email Decorum
Read and edit your emails to make them as easy as possible to understand. Be clear about what you’d like to say and say it in a concise manner.
Include a subject line in all e-mails. Choose a subject that will be meaningful and memorable to both you and the recipient(s).
Use correct spelling, grammar, and punctuation in your e-mails. Always proofread and spell-check.
Double-check the address your e-mail is going to so that it is received by the correct recipient.
Don’t send messages that say things you wouldn’t say in a face-to-face conversation. Never send anything by e-mail that you would not want made public.
Acronyms such as TMI (Too Much Information) can confuse and annoy e-mail recipients.
Don't start a completely new e-mail each time you respond to someone. Instead, reply to the sender so that sent and received messages can be read and reread together as a unit.
Avoid excessive punctuation. The importance of your text should speak for itself.
Sending an angry e-mail message, or flaming is unacceptable. UPPER CASE LOOKS LIKE SHOUTING AND MAY BE INTERPRETED AS SUCH.
Reread every e-mail before sending to make sure your message won't be read the wrong way.
Make requests politely. Say "please" and "thank you", just like in person.
Your tone should reflect your relationship to the recipient. An informal tone is appropriate for friends. A formal tone should be used to communicate with adults and others you don’t know well.
E-mail is personal correspondence. Never quote from, or forward on private e-mails sent to you.
Publicizing someone's e-mail address without their permission is an invasion of their privacy.
Reply to e-mails within 24 hours if at all possible.
Mechanics of ePALS
ePALS addresses don’t contain your full name. They are meant to be anonymous for safety reasons. ePALS only delivers messages to other ePALS. Sign messages with your name and last initial only.
Menu Options
My Inbox: Where emails sent to you go.
Compose: Allows you to send an email
Folders: For Organizing emails received
Addresses: Stores emails of friends
Signature: A preset, personal closing including your name
Help: For questions or finding out how to do something.
Parts of An Email
To: Type in the complete email address of the person you’re sending your message “to”. You can send an email to more than one person by entering each address separated by a comma.
CC: Carbon copy. Type in the complete email address of the person whom you’d like to send a copy of your message to. Mrs. Malone may want a “copy” of what you send as a record of your work.
Bcc: Blind carbon copy. Allows you to send a copy of your message to someone without other recipients knowing about it. Those who are bcc’ed won’t see their address on the message.
Subject: A word or two that conveys the content of your message, like a title. When you open your inbox, you will see the subject and sender of each message you receive.
Options
Reply: Sends a message back to the person who sent it to you, without retyping the address
Reply All: Sends a message back to all the recipients of the message, without retyping addresses
Forward: Sends a message that you received on to you to someone else. You can add a note, too.
Attachments: A way to send word documents, pictures, or other files along with your message.
Save Draft: Allows you to save and keep working on a message before sending it.
Cancel: Allows you to clear your screen, if you have decided not to send a message after all.
Send: Delivers your message to the person or people who’s email address appear in the “to” box.
Copy outgoing messages to my Sent Items folder: Allows you to keep a record of what you sent.
Translate: Allows you to send messages you write in English in different languages (literal).
ePALS Email Addresses
Bennie Dover Epals List
PASSWORD: bdjms123
Period 1 (under Coiro)
Jamell Caldwell: jamellc@epals.com
Reynaldo Diaz: reynaldod@epals.com
Jarel Drayton: jareld@epals.com
Richard Goss: richardgo5@epals.com
Cianny Reyes: cianny@epals.com
Marcos Guerrero: marcosgu3@epals.com
Rodney Riley: rodneyri@epals.com
Robert Key: robertke15@epals.com
Gabriel Martinez: gabrielma13@epals.com
Chaurielle Robinson: chauriell@epals.com
Jaumaane Ladson: jaumaane@epals.com
Yolanda Martinez: yolandama5@epals.com
Reynaldo Sierra: reynaldosi@epals.com
Period 5 (under Coiro)
Keila Pena: keilape@epals.com
Victor Nunez: victornu4@epals.com
Tesla Delcid Pichardo: teslad@epals.com
Aunisha Dillon: aunisha@epals.com
Katerina Outlaw: katerinao@epals.com
Jasmine Ramirez: jasminera6@epals.com
Harly Cantave: harlyc@epals.com
Tamixa Sandoval: tamixa@epals.com
Khaleed Fine: khaleedf@epals.com
Samual Silva: samualsi@epals.com
Iccus Harley: iccus@epals.com
Cintya Urena: cintyau@epals.com
Eric Hughes: erichu4@epals.com
Alicia Vallario: aliciava3@epals.com
Natoniah Williams: natoniah@epals.com
(Under Torrente)
Divona Johnson: divonaj@epals.com
Hector Lucena: ctorlu2@epals.com
Romer Ochoa: romeroc1@epals.com
Kyle Ortiz: kyleor4@epals.com
Jennifer Portella: jenniferpo15@epals.com
Edgar Sanchez: edgarsa9@epals.com
Jasmine Snell: jasminesn2@epals.com
Lurel Cabrera: lurel@epals.com
Jevon Clarke: jevoncl@epals.com
Mariah Everett: mariahev@epals.com
Desiree Mills: desireemi1@epals.com
Fersan Warren: fersan@epals.com
Kristal Falcon: kristalf@epals.com
Jose A. Rossado: josero41@epals.com
Nneka Floyd: nnekaf@epals.com
Jarvis Surney: jarvissu@epals.com
Malcolm Jenkins: malcolmje@epals.com
Vanesha Tate: vaneshat@epals.com
Andrew Maynard: andrewma85@epals.com
Keith Thomas: keithth2@epals.com
Shateeka Phillips: shateeka@epals.com
Luisanna Cabrera: luisannac@epals.com
Rossel Pichardo: rosselp@epals.com
DeJohn Fernandes: dejohn@epals.com
Shaquan Green: shaquang@epals.com
Daniel Roman: danielro70@epals.com
Ariel Beal: arielbe1@epals.com
Kyle McKinnon: kylemc41@epals.com
Tiyana Brown: tiyanab@epals.com
Nathan Epperson: nathanep@epals.com
Nicholas Green: nicholasgr9@epals.com
Johan Guardamino: johangu1@epals.com
Under Nelson
Creg McPherson: cregm@epals.com
Christopher Pina: christoppi13@epals.com
Adrina Robinson: adrinaro@epals.com
Ivelise Rodriguez: ivelise@epals.com
Jose L. Rosado: josero42@epals.com
Samantha Spann: samanthasp4@epals.com
Josephine Spinnato: josephinsp@epals.com
Akia Underwood: akiau@epals.com
Malina Fisher: malinaf@epals.com
Eddie Johnson: eddiejo4@epals.com
Vibaldy Luna: vibaldy@epals.com
Christina Rosario: christinro17@epals.com
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